We got are feedback on our our treatment, the first thing we got feedback on was our Audience section, the thought that that me addressing London was too a narrow audience. They also said that we needed to state other pieces of media our audience would enjoy, and build more a profile for themTry to build more of a profile of them.
We got feedback on our Narrative and they said that it was clear yet the summary of the story was not well written i will have to back to this and check my grammar. They also said that we needed to include the name of our main character. They also said that are idea is orignal and it is more uplifting than a previous british social realism films.They also said that we needed more detail in the typography
We got feedback on our title, they said that they like the title but they thought that the theme of aspiration was not well explained, I like the title although your explanation about aspiration is not well explained. They also said that the title might put the audience of because it might convey that the film is miserable.
We aslso got feedback saying that we needed to give more explanation on the main character, by stating her name age and her background. We got feedback on the conventions saying it lacked detail. They said that Editing was clearly explained.They said that the instition was rushed and it needed more detail and state the instistuation.
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We got feedback on our Narrative and they said that it was clear yet the summary of the story was not well written i will have to back to this and check my grammar. They also said that we needed to include the name of our main character. They also said that are idea is orignal and it is more uplifting than a previous british social realism films.They also said that we needed more detail in the typography
We got feedback on our title, they said that they like the title but they thought that the theme of aspiration was not well explained, I like the title although your explanation about aspiration is not well explained. They also said that the title might put the audience of because it might convey that the film is miserable.
We aslso got feedback saying that we needed to give more explanation on the main character, by stating her name age and her background. We got feedback on the conventions saying it lacked detail. They said that Editing was clearly explained.They said that the instition was rushed and it needed more detail and state the instistuation.
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